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I'd probably add DeAngelo first, even though he might not be in the NHL right away. Huge numbers in the OHL, and good (although not as overpowering) numbers in his first AHL season. Failing that, Parayko would probably be your next best option. But if you're in win-now mode, Parayko might be your better option.
The way you've got the rest of them ranked is fine. Michael Stone stands out as the best of the rest of the bunch, particularly in multi-category leagues.