I like your forwards aside from Read, but not sure who else is available.
As for you D - it looks like you already have quite a bit of hits with your FW's, so like others have said I think Dillon and Faulk are replaceable. I would keep Girardi though as he's a solid multi-cat guy.
I would take Campbell and Carle over those 2. Campbell's still their best Dman and I think his +/- will be a lot better this year especially if Thomas is in net. Either way, Florida should be pretty good this year.
Carle is the man in TB and blocks a lot of shots and should be good for around 40 pts. Pretty solid and very safe.
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G, A, +/-, PIM, SOG, STP, HITS, BS, W, GAA, SV | 4C, 4LW, 4RW, 6D, 1G
C - Crosby, W.Nylander, Kempe, B.Howden, Wallmark, Z.Sanford, Newhook
LW - Ovechkin, Vrana, S.Bennett, Lehkonen, Aston-Reese, T.Benson, S.Poulin
RW - JT.Miller, Coleman, Gourde, Dzingel, Tippett, Volkov
D - Klingberg, Chabot, Slavin, Matheson, Chychrun, Sanheim, D.Toews, E.Bouchard, Cholowski
G - J.Gibson, DeSmith, Sparks, Luukkonen, Starrett