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Dobber 01-24-2011 10:37 AM

[Black Aces] Writing Tips
 
If you want to contribute to this section with some quick thoughts, then by all means please do. However, if you are interested in posting a full-blown column with the hopes of perhaps getting the odd one up on the front page and then eventually parlaying that into a writing gig, I thought I would provide some writing tips. It will help you get to the next level in term of your writing skills.

1) The first thing that jumps out at me are the numbers. If a number is below 10, then you write it out in full. One, two, ..., nine, 10, 11. Also first, second, ..., ninth, 10th, 11th.
2) Overusing "I" and "me". You can use those terms, but try not to. Take the focus off of you, if possible.
3) Hyphenation. If two words are used to describe something (adjectives) and one word is related to the next, then hyphenate it. The 20 year old Tommy Smith (wrong). The 20-year-old Tommy Smith (correct).
4) plus/minus: use plus-10 and minus-10 instead of +10 and -10
5) Length: 300 words will not get it to the front page. I'd need at least 550.
6) Stating the obvious - re-read your column. Did you say something in the second paragraph and third sentence that has already been said or is blatantly obvious? You may want to remove it.
7) Related to 1) - never begin a sentence with a number and if you absolutely must, then spell it out every time, even if it is above nine. 10 times out of 10, this sentence looks bush. Ten times out of 10, this sentence looks professional.


I'll dig up some guidelines that I have from one of the magazines that I write for and post it here if you really want to go in-depth with getting this right.

metaldude26 01-24-2011 10:39 AM

Consider this bookmarked!

GMGates 01-24-2011 10:58 AM

Awesome! Consider this Stickied!

metaldude26 01-24-2011 11:15 AM

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Originally Posted by GMGates (Post 642792)
Awesome! Consider this Stickied!

Just had to one up me!

GMGates 01-24-2011 11:34 AM

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Originally Posted by metaldude26 (Post 642803)
Just had to one up me!

Haha :)

I just wanted to add that any member wishing to post an article or contribution in the PG Section to simply send myself or Praba a PM indicating your intentions. We'll most likely say yes - I've yet to refuse someone - but it's just to help regulate traffic.

GMG

JD88 01-24-2011 12:01 PM

Great tips from the man himself thanks very much for this!!

dyzfunctioned 01-24-2011 01:15 PM

Good tips I hate when people don't write out numbers... If I'm writing an essay or anything I usually write out numbers unless they're over 100.

On a related note, if I post up my sociology essay will you proof read it? :)

JD88 01-24-2011 01:58 PM

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Originally Posted by dyzfunctioned (Post 642902)
Good tips I hate when people don't write out numbers... If I'm writing an essay or anything I usually write out numbers unless they're over 100.

On a related note, if I post up my sociology essay will you proof read it? :)

I am for sure guilty of this and a few other points that Dobber noted which is why I am very appreciative that he posted this. I am trying to get better at my writing I sometimes just wish that I had a program that I could link to my brain and would type out what I am think with proper grammar and spelling. For now I am going to do my best to take these notes and ingrain them into my brain. Thanks Again Dobber

GMGates 01-24-2011 02:23 PM

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Originally Posted by Dobber (Post 642773)
I'll dig up some guidelines that I have from one of the magazines that I write for and post it here if you really want to go in-depth with getting this right.

Just keep adding to your Original Post. All tips, tricks and information is very appreciated.

Thanks again Dobber.

Bomm Bastic 01-24-2011 03:32 PM

To outta fore posters agree, Dbber is the man.


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